2016 (end of!)
Before the Christmas frenzy overtakes us all, we gather in
December for a session on How to Write Dazzling Descriptions. Picture
this:
First, we look at how experienced writers weave descriptive
passages into dialogue, thought and action in order to avoid the notorious ‘info-dump’,
that chunk of extended description which stops the story – the part, as Elmore
Leonard put it, ‘that readers tend to
skip’.
Next, we agree that the reader is bound to need a sense of
physical location (setting) and some back story, so we explore techniques for describing
the essential details without distracting from the story - whilst at the same
time conveying the protagonist’s mood and feelings without slowing the pace.
Then, for a while the room is quiet, but for the scratch and
rustle of pen and paper; and finally, we
have just enough time to share the results - and we are bowled over, as usual, by everyone’s
deft and dazzling prose!
All this in two and a half hours – fuelled by a coffee and
cake break!
2017 (Beginning of!)
As an apt start to the New Year, we call our January workshop New Resolutions in Writing!
The question is: how can we create a sense of ‘authenticity’
in our character, plot and theme? We jot down a list of personal passions,
interests and aspirations, choose one and add some detail. For some of us, it’s
like opening the flood gates – there’s so much to say.
So, as writers, how can we exploit all this enthusiasm and knowledge,
as a way of strengthening our connection with the reader? The answer is to
place some of that (ready-made) passion at the centre of your main character’s
motivation. Hold that thought.
Another question: what is ‘theme’? We collaborate on a definition
and agree that it is an idea or issue which crops up repeatedly, connecting the
‘internal journey’ of the
protagonist with the ‘external conflict’.
This drives the action forward, leading to some form of transformation.
Then we write. The scenario is this: a character is faced
with redundancy (external conflict). Set
the immediate crisis alongside the potential of pursuing another personal
passion or ambition. Does she/he choose the safe or risky option? What is the
goal that drives them (internal journey)? Add another problem. Pile on the
pressure and you have a story!
We part company after
sharing our sketched out plots – full of ideas and good intentions!
Check the website soon for details of the next Workshop, to be held on Thursday 2nd February and
repeated on Friday 3rd February, both 10am-12.30, at The Village
Paintpot, Elloughton.
Look forward to seeing you there!
