Time for an update on recent Thoughttree Writing Workshop successes!

2016 (end of!)

Before the Christmas frenzy overtakes us all, we gather in December for a session on How to Write Dazzling Descriptions. Picture this:

First, we look at how experienced writers weave descriptive passages into dialogue, thought and action in order to avoid the notorious ‘info-dump’, that chunk of extended description which stops the story – the part, as Elmore Leonard put it,  ‘that readers tend to skip’.  

Next, we agree that the reader is bound to need a sense of physical location (setting) and some back story, so we explore techniques for describing the essential details without distracting from the story - whilst at the same time conveying the protagonist’s mood and feelings without slowing the pace.

Then, for a while the room is quiet, but for the scratch and rustle of pen and paper;  and finally, we have just enough time to share the results  - and we are bowled over, as usual, by everyone’s deft and dazzling prose!

All this in two and a half hours – fuelled by a coffee and cake break!

2017 (Beginning of!)

As an apt start to the New Year, we call our January workshop New Resolutions in Writing!

The question is: how can we create a sense of ‘authenticity’ in our character, plot and theme? We jot down a list of personal passions, interests and aspirations, choose one and add some detail. For some of us, it’s like opening the flood gates – there’s so much to say.

So, as writers, how can we exploit all this enthusiasm and knowledge, as a way of strengthening our connection with the reader? The answer is to place some of that (ready-made) passion at the centre of your main character’s motivation.  Hold that thought.

Another question: what is ‘theme’? We collaborate on a definition and agree that it is an idea or issue which crops up repeatedly, connecting the ‘internal journey’ of the protagonist with the ‘external conflict’. This drives the action forward, leading to some form of transformation.

Then we write. The scenario is this: a character is faced with redundancy (external conflict).  Set the immediate crisis alongside the potential of pursuing another personal passion or ambition. Does she/he choose the safe or risky option? What is the goal that drives them (internal journey)? Add another problem. Pile on the pressure and you have a story!

 We part company after sharing our sketched out plots – full of ideas and good intentions!

Check the website soon for details of the next Workshop, to be held on Thursday 2^nd February and repeated on Friday 3^rd February, both 10am-12.30, at The Village Paintpot, Elloughton.

Look forward to seeing you there!