Friday 8 April 2016

Young Writers showcase

As promised - some fine descriptive writing from young writers - this time Amelia, year 4.

Enjoy!
The Monstrous Night… by Amelia

Once upon a time there was a field. The bright green grass swayed in the shimmering wind. The spreading branches trembled in the blue-sky breeze. The warm wind flowed in between the emerald green blades of grass, while the golden sun glowed. Autumn coloured leaves flew through turquoise air.
           
In the field was a scarecrow. He was loving, happy and a giant smile on his face.

            
That night there was a monstrous storm. Fierce lightning flashed while dark rain poured in the ebony night. The powerful wind prowled like wolves howling and growling. The wolf wind grabbed the leaves and tossed them in the air. It pulled on the scarecrow’s straw. It spun him round and round. It stole the scarecrow’s torn hat and scarf. The wind tugged at his head and his arms until he was torn apart and laying on the grass in peace.


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