Harvey is Year 6 and finds writing extremely challenging. For me, this is when free verse poetry can be great. Here's Harvey's splendid effort. It gave us the chance to use some dynamic verbs (and remind ourselves to use commas in lists).
LION
They have muscles to grab.
Lions are very vicious because they don't know how to
play!
Lions can hear elephants stomp from 100 metres
because they are a BIG species.
Lions eat very savagely,
snorting, panting, growling, grinding!
by Harvey
Gold Star, Harvey!
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